Open Poetry #23 |
Caramel (Haiku) |
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Caramel on a stick So rich and sweet and chewy gone in ten seconds |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
You just made me hungry again. LOL Good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
well you won a caramel apple! seriously it was nice. fyi: traditionally haikus are concerned with nature. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is yummy. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Absolutely! Nice one. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...I love this, sweet friend, this made me hungry for Dairy Queen, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is very yummy and gooey! Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Must not be a Sugar Daddy, those aren't even gone in 10 minutes! I should have known not to come in here. Going in for the annual blood-work up this a.m. so can't each until after the nurse takes her samples. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Hearts_Dance Junior Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 31 |
Caramel is one of my favorite treats, and even better on apples. Neat! |
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