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Color Me |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Color me rose tint on pale white flesh of maiden fair faults behind the soft of veil the lightest gold of hair. Sapphire blue for eyes that swim with dreams so deep in swirl the look of innocence, of whim of the hidden little girl. Pale of shades for mood of life lost in the midst of blame, placed in picture as the wife hint of gray in frame. Color me with passioned brush paint me with your artists touch. WhiteRose 11/02/02 "my reflection becomes me" [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-02-2002 08:38 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, I like the colors you painted this poem with. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rose of White, from your photo, I'd say you did a fine job of describing yourself! Beautiful woman, beautiful poem! EA |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
This is BEAUTIFUL!! hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You sure colored this poem with beautiful words Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wonderful write of theme and imagery..enjoyed the rhyme scheme you chose to showcase your poetic colors  Lovely WR jm Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, and may you always be painted with the colors of beauty and lifes blessings and tinseled in maidenhair! kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exceptional. ThisDiamond |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful colors you've used here, my friend...enjoyed... jwesley |
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