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The Spy
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The Spy |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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Your on the computer But you feel eyes in back of you You hate the feeling And look in back of you Nobody is there But you can hear talking Even though it is not clear You go back to your work But the feeling comes again This time you feel a breathe On the back of your neck You swing the chair around The person is gone What does he want? What have I done? You try to finish your work But the feeling comes once more You turn around To see nobody once more What are they trying to find out? What are they trying to do? Your just doing your work And they are spying on you Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Hmm... sounds like either ghosts or parents. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sounds like a ghost to me. You should wear garlic or something. No wait, that just keeps away boyfriends.  Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Maybe its a good ghost, Julie... Put a mirror on your monitor and then you can see who sneaks up behind you... I liked your poem  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOOOHHHH!!! Now I 'm looking over my shoulder!!! A good poem, Julie. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Thank you to all who replied. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Julie, I too understand these ghostly disturbances, sweet friend, In think sometimes we tend to hear voices others don't, this is well-said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Sounds like my mom. always asking me what I'm doing on the computer all this time. I tell her I'm emailing friends. If she knew I was writing poetry, she would want to read it. UGGH! But mabee it is a ghost for you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mama Chipmunk had a super idea regarding the mirror!--I think I'll go buy one too! EA |
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