Open Poetry #23 |
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rain tears |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind ![]() |
rain tears wetness touching down upon every leaf dripping disappearing into the ground washing feeding all the world then behind no-where out from the gray the sun drying all the rain tears left behind Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
then behind no-where out from the gray the sun drying all the rain tears left behind This is beautiful!! Thanks for sharing your gift. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There are so many wondrous happenings in the natural world around us---You are one who sees! EA |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, for this gentle refreshing rain. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bernie, I love this. I like the way the sun came out and dried all he tears up.......but, like I read between the lines, tears are necessary at times for growth. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I seem to be reading those that hold so much truth tonight..nicely expressed Bernie. M |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Gentle spirit thanks every once in a while i get a verse that hits me just great EA I live in florida, monsooooooon rains happen all the time, while sitting watching all this happen just got to me. Thank for reading Midnite don't forget the sun did come out.. thank you for reading and telling me u did Ethel As I do enjoy the things u write, for some reason, u read between what i am really saying, along with what is happening.... thank you dear friend M catchy ain't it... opps there's that ain't word. thank you also dear friend. Bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (11-01-2002 11:29 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the imagery in this, sweet friend, a rainstorm of beauty downpours in your words and lights the world with diamonds, you always describe such visions so beautifully, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed this my friend... very nice jwesley |
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