Open Poetry #23 |
Not Said |
scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Not Said We talked last night. But parted with things not said. I left things not right. I know I made you sad. But in the morning light I want to make amend I need to hold you tight. I love you. Now it's been said. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is so sensitive and beautiful, sweet friend, and I hope your love hears you and happily hugs you with a smile always! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Scorpio - Welcome to the club. Here's a bit of wisdom - First you learn how to crawl, then you learn how to walk, then you become a man, then you learn how to crawl. I'm getting better at the crawling part. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Scorpio..Things always look much better in the morning light, you know? Perhaps the unsaid things will be even more welcome come the dawn. Maybe she just needs a big hug and for you to tell her how much she's loved. Yet another thoughtful write from you.. touching on one of life's sad yet tender moments. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Noah...Thank you for your kind support. LongJohn...I'll crawl over anything to make her happy. Enchantress...I can only hope she feels my love today. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So often we see things much more clearly in the light of the following day. Give her this touching poem and hopefully it will undo anything that you want undone! EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Earth Angel...The morning light does tend to make things better...I shall dedicate this poem to my love and hopes she will forgive me... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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