Open Poetry #23 |
Autumn Leaving |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Click to play piano solo ~ Autumn Leaves minimize after opening ~*Autumn Leaving*~ This love is like a fragile leaf, Where it will land I do not know. Thoughts flutter in the autumn breeze, telling my heart to let you go. I hide here in my solitude my heart hanging by a thread. I imagine I hear you calling me those whispers in my head. I long for you to kiss me and it’s for your lips I yearn. Searing inside this heart is an ember and only you can make it burn. I long for you to whisper those words I hold so dear. Stitch my heart back up again and dissipate my fear. I cannot breathe without you my flame now dies inside. My love for you is drowning in all the tears I’ve cried. And like the autumn leaves, you circle around my heart, but you had not intentions, of commitment from the start. So as the leaves around me fall, I’d hold you close if only I could, but in my heart, I know you must go so my love, goodbye for good. Art: Lee Bogle - Autumn Music: Autumn Leaves |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some things must just fade away... like autumn...falling.... lovely! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sharon, this sounds so very sad, sweet friend, i hope this is only fictional to you but sadly so many feel this way I know and my heart goes out to them all and wish for eternal spring to shine within their hearts! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely and somewhat melancholy Sharon. Enjoyed so much today. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
So gentle in your despair. (What woods could I trip over her in?) Just kidding.....enjoyed |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely lovely piece, Sharon... indeed... the autumn of a relationship is like the autumn of the year ~ hugs and acorns Lyra |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sharon - I hope this isn't a recent event - How are you? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It is JUST a poem folks. I could write a book about marriage and divorce trust me, I have sure done it often enough LOL, but I do thank you for your sweet comments. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sharon I am glad that it isn't real to life for you at the moment......sigh..... I have felt these things and you have captured those feelings so well. Hugs you, a beautiful write. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sharon you have written this so beautifully. I am happy to know you aren't going through this, And, I love the picture. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
NOT "just a poem" tis a melancholy beauty...wonderful write of theme and emotion...and as always the perfect song and pic. See...you wrote the ache so well..they all were feeling it... what does that tell you??? HMMMMM??? Listen to the moth Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I do confess ... this from some long forgotten feelings I had indeed and yes, I felt it hard once at having to let someone go I loved, but keeping them would have killed me eventually. Thank you for you nice responses on this one fall leaving, and unfortunately there were too many. |
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