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An Eye Blinks
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An Eye Blinks |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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effortlessly, the spirit glides an eye blinks and He sees the actions and entire histories of countless people He notifies other spirits who are not particularly paying attention, should Their charges be in some sort of trouble He makes a circle with an arm, sending a message to Mother Earth, and She responds by cleansing a sick man, in a room, alone **** **** **** ..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris ..poem archived in several other sites |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I wasn't quite sure how to look at this and i thought may as well be jealous so well written definatly my kind of poem very awe inspireing image plainly described The very deep did rot: O Christ! |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
.Walter Poe../\.thank you, for reading my poem; i appreciate your kind words.. ../\..Spiros -------------calm seas--------- |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
There are times when the only explanation is in your poem. You captured that feeling very well. Great presentation, Spiros. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
.LngJhnAg../\..thank you for reading my poem and for taking the time to comment; i appreciate your kind words.. ../\..Spiros ----------------calm seas--------- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
an eye blinks and if not careful one would miss this meaningful poem..you have a calming way with words M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Spiros, you do have a way with words. I love your poetry. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..nakdthoughts../\.. + garysgirl../\.. ..thank you very much for reading my poem; very kind, your comments../\..Spiros ---------------rivers of peace----- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) It is always important to remain attentive so you don't know what you're missing in case a blink can be fatal! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is a great deal of peace to be found in this, if one will simply sit, and listen... well done, Sir... |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Mistletoe Angel../\.. + Sunshine../\.. ..thank you much for commenting on my poem; i appreciate, a lot, your kind words.. ./\..Spiros -----------------Kindness------ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Spiros I really enjoyed reading your words and I'll certainly look forward to reading more. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
One way to keep your spirit guides' attention is through meditation. It works for me! I have enjoyed the poems of yours that I have read thus far. This was no exception. Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Your poetry is so completely relaxing... and so very much appreciated. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Suetang../\..Earth Angel../\.. + Enchantress../\.. ..thank you for the very kind comments; i'm pleased you like my poem../\..Spiros -----------------calm seas------- |
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