Open Poetry #23 |
Crystalized |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A place I have walked in poetic dreams.. of waterfalls roaring and crystal streams.. Nicely done KJ... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
frozen liquid, crystal streams waterfalls of icy dreams... sorry... I just couldn't help it Karilea... You are an inspiration! and this is a ~ frozen chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
In endless dreams of life's sweet whirl floating in crystals streams forever swirled Beautiful and inspiring. umm.......I couldn't help myself either. Perfect Sunshine. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
ooooo! Let's collaborate on this poem! I see my fat kitty in insolent repose Upon the forbidden kitchen counter I'd love to crystalize her from tail to nose And make it look like that's how I found her. But Lorelei knows me far too well, She sees through me like a pane of glass She'd chastise me (that's give me hell) And finish with a kick in the pants. OK - Karilea - It's your turn now! lol BTW - I love your poem - short and sweet |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
see what you inspire in others??? we were doing so well till the pirate came in...rofl AHEM...LONG JOHN!!!!! Ms K....now youve got a moth turning green at your technological talents as well as your poetic and? you do know this is a moth poem... a definate "pretty blue flame" and a keeper. Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I'll light the candles You bring the wine. We'll share the night glowing in the crystal reflections. Well, it just popped out .... see how inspiring you are Karilea. I think my hubby's going to love this idea!! Beautiful crystal graphic and words....Hugs, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
For all around us, I sense there's more, And this I do decry, There's more to heaven And earth, my friend, Than that which meets the eye! --And no one knows that better than you do! EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A prism can take a single ray of light and create a rainbow...you took a thought and did the same thing...beautiful ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquistely beautiful Karilea! Love this...may I keep it? ~Hugs YOU!~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea That's because you look with sunshine. You do make it beautiful! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the power of your crystallized thoughts. Now, if we concentrate all that crystal sunlight onto that kitty kicker's rear..... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful, Sunshine! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A beautiful snap shot. The ladders of life that we scale merrily Move mysteriously around So that when you think you're climbing up, man In fact you're climbing down-Nick ca |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Looking through the bent backed tulips To see how the other half live Looking through a glass onion." -- Beatles, White Album, track three that's what this reminded me of... gorgeous Kari... |
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