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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Beware to tell the truthful from the false. Whenever truth and false go masquerade. Or else you will be made to live appalled by brillant lies and promises, enthralled via Lucifer's iniquities replayed. Beware to tell the truthful from the false. Such lies will only lead to bitter gall. Don't listen to vile plans cunningly made. Or else you will forced to live appalled, bounded by deception's granite walls and swiftly lead to death's rotating blades. Beware to tell the truthful from the false. Triumphant serpents hiss when truth is mauled. They serpentine in the abyss of death's shade. Unless you wish to live your life appalled Beware to tell the truthful from the false. [This message has been edited by Radrook (10-30-2002 11:30 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssss) Oh Radrook, this is wonderfully haunted, sweet friend, unfortunately there are many who lie among everyone and that saddens me! (sad sigh) If there is anything I hate more than anything, it is to tell a lie! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Radrook, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such an awesome poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Radrook, this is a poem filled with truths in it. I hate to be lied to. Even if the truth hurts, I'll get over it. When I'm made to believe in an untruth, it really hurts. I've never understood how a person can be so deceiving to people and still look themselves in the mirror. I've been told that I'm TOO honest !!??!! Is there such a thing?? Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Yes, isn't it sad when one places one's whole trust in a person or an organization and the whole thing turns out to be lies? Too much of that going around! Thanks for feedback everyone. God bless! |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
I absolutely loved this! It is just so true that you have to beware of lies masquerading as truth. You know there's an old, old saying that my Mother taught me to try and prevent just such a thing... Believe none of what you hear, and only half of what you see... Awesome write Radrook!! Tammy |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Radrook, this is ~PERFECT~ ! You touched the pit of my stomach and my very soul. Thank You  Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Glad you enjoyed! Someone who lies breaks the unspoken agreed trust that we are speaking truth for the sake of social harmony. After all, if we could not rely on ANYTHING said to us, then civilization would not be possible. Imagine a planet where the creatures lied at least 99% of the time. Could such a civilization even really arise? If so--how? [This message has been edited by Radrook (10-31-2002 01:15 PM).] |
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