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Open Poetry #23

The world of sadness

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

0 posted 2002-10-30 04:10 PM

The world of sadness is beautiful
But I am afraid
The sky above is like
The dress of a mourning queen,
black satin with diamonds
And when it rains,
It rains the tears of my troubles,
And all of the plants are vines,
wrapping around my feet to slow me down.
It is full of ghosts-
The ghosts of my past,
who try to bring me down.
But if I stay
In the world of my dreams,
I don't need to come back again

~Wind~
you know where the world of sadness is

[This message has been edited by Wind (10-30-2002 04:11 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-30 04:18 PM

Wind,
Even though this is
a poem about sadness, it is
still a beautiful poem. I like the
way you wrote it. Thanks for sharing
it with us.

Love To All,
Ethel

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

2 posted 2002-10-30 04:18 PM

Take it from a ghost reality is sweeter and more terrible than dreams could ever be

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-30 04:20 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, this is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, yes, always slip into where your dreams are when you are aching for dreams are what make life seem more colorful and some can come true if you hold them dear! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-10-30 04:23 PM

Your world of sadness seems so real. You expressed it rather eloquently.

Sending you a warm hug

EA

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