Open Poetry #23 |
Her Presence |
Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
at times, he missed her more a second would do; a solitary second apart would set his heart aflutter yes, the import of her smile could make all the difference call it weakness, call it need; call it human desire- but study her tenderness for an instant and even stars will panic to forgive and blink their understanding **** **** **** ..circa 1986..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris ..poem archived in several other sites ..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
beutifully simple and gentle. a man after my own heart btw are you Raj6148@aol ? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This...is poetry. Thank you! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your words touch all our hearts on so many different levels, I love it! (smiles) This is a true keeper, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Spiros, yo write beautiful work. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..majnu../\..the_loner_23../\..Sunshine../\.. + Mistletoe Angel../\.. ..thank you for reading my poem; i appreciate your comments....majnu>i don't understand your question; i'm not Raj6148@aol ../\..Spiros -----------trees------------ |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
A very poetic ending. Sweet. Thank you. etoodog |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
this was beautiful..took my breath away.. had to read it several times to take it all in... BlueEyes |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..garysgirl../\..Robert Adamson../\.. + Blue Eyes../\.. ..truly appreciate your reading of my poem and your kind comments; thanks.. ../\..Spiros --------------calm seas----- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ram and you most assuredly have a wonderful way with words! Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"but study her tenderness for an instant and even stars will panic to forgive and blink their understanding" -------------------------------------------- Absolutely beautiful write! Much enjoyed...love the ending, very romantic. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Earth Angel../\.. + Enchantress../\.. ..thank you, both, for reading/commenting on my poem; very kind, your words.. ../\..Spiros ------------------trees-------- |
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