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Missing You |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Missing You You said that I don't miss you. That implies you think I can walk away each time without looking back. I start to miss you the minute I kiss you goodbye. Your perfume on my skin, Your soft touches etched into my body, Your caressing kisses lingering on my lips... Make me want to turn back and delay my farewell. Leaving you is the hardest thing I do. And missing you is something that stays. Stays with me until I see you again. Rushing to hold you. So my Love never doubt how much I miss you. It's as deep a loss as you feel. A pain aching in my heart as badly as in yours. And cured only by the sweet reunion of our lips. ...believe what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (10-30-2002 04:34 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Scorpio, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is so sad and I hope soon your love truly does miss you and feels the way you do and you kiss each other hello again! (sigh) I send angel hugs of comfort your way, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you in wishing for the best for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
All of this "missing you" was so intense, I started to feel lonely and I reached out to touch the monitor! Oh, dear, I do sound so pathetic! tehe EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, I love this poem, but being the incurable romantic that I am, that's to be expected. It really does make me think of every time that Gary and I have to leave each other again. If you're speaking of yourself in this poem, I hope that you and your loved one will be together, soon. Thanks for sharing your poem. Love to All, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*SIGH*  Ohhhh Myyyyy!!Beautiful, tender and heartfelt write Scorpio! With words like these you won't be missing her for long.. You do wear your heart on your sleeve very well. A very lucky lady she is to be on the receiving end of such passion. I think I shall claim this one as mine.. ..and I'm keeping it! ~Heart-hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
This poem is full of emotion.. so sad but beautiful... Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right |
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starshine24 New Member
since 2002-10-31
Posts 6 |
hey, i like it. Esp the part about walking away without looking back. we all know how that can be... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for reading and commenting on "Missing You"...I appreciate all of your support very much... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This portends that you never take anyone for granted... as it should be! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The true understanding of love.......missing one and awaiting their return. This is lovely scorpio. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Scorpio - You are a devil - You've made all these women sigh and pat their breast. This is the most flagrant violation of a woman's sensitivities. This is despicable. This is really great. I wish I had thought of this first! lol |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes Karilea...I try very hard not to take anyone for granted...And this was a chance to tell someone very special something I should have told her much earlier...and Gentle Spirit thank you for your support... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Long John...do you really think I caused that? There is something to be said about the power of poetry!!!  ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
scorpio There is so much power in poetry...to tell a feeling, especially love...it is magic. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Martie...Like most men, I can be accused of not expressing my emotions and thoughts to the one I love...Writing in pip has helped me to say out loud what I have often kept inside...I promise to keep doing better.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Stanley Climbfall Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 16 |
An ode to your loved one eloquently stated! I most enjoy your sentiments, good day to you! Stanley Climbfall [This message has been edited by Stanley Climbfall (11-15-2002 03:45 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Stanley...and welcome to Passions in Poetry...I'm flattered your firt post was to my poem... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, I forgot to put this in my library before. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh Scorpio, This is so beautiful and what we all would want our loves to know and feel, male or female, alike. And, when in a loving relationship the missing is immediate...I remember... you captured it so perfectly. Thanks, enjoyed this greatly. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful expression of the pain and rhapsody of missing...James |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you,Pat...yes the missing is immediate..the reunion sweet... James, thank you for your comments...I like the phrase "rhapsody of missing"...could be a poem title... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
You have said, in the most perfect way, what a lot of men might like to say in such a situation. *sigh* This is exquisite. Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful write, Scorpio... Sad but passionate  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah.......nice 'missing you' poem......I used to write these...till I didn't have anything or anyone to miss any more......enjoyed the passion of the read |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you TwoHeartsOnePen...i agree it's not easy sometimes for a man like myself to find the right words to convey what's in my heart.. Thank you Lyra...the saddness is gone...replaced by passion again... Jellybean..I'm pleased on two counts....first you read my verse... and secondly you not missing someone or something!! ...believe what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (11-19-2002 03:45 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you tell this with a sincere voice..that could not help but touch the one it was written for... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Cpat Hair...thank you for reading...I can only hope my muse is pleased too... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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