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Open Poetry #23

In The Aftermath

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

0 posted 2002-10-30 03:56 PM

In the aftermath as fact is Truth,
Shanti undressed by candlelight rooms.
I glide with her and the sea;
My neighbor on-line with Iris.
And Eternal Heavens oblique Jehu,
And Her gallantry unlocked sublunar
And spaced each memory.
...In the aftermath.

All died living, unlike Youth.
Splitting by blossoms valor,
Against the wind with Messiah
As a poetic leaf--
Above lips, the villa and wombs.
...in the aftermath.

etoodog

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-10-30 04:00 PM

Pure and charming write. Liked this very much. Will read many times. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-10-30 04:07 PM

Excellent write!
One to tuck away in my library
and read once again when it's quiet.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

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