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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-10-30 03:54 PM




I hear you call my name
As you walk in through the door
You know the rules of the game
We've played so many times before

Just follow the trail of petals
Up the stairs to the bedroom
Rose oil will fill your senses
All around you it will loom

My shiny satin chemise
Barely covers the tops of my thighs
Here I wait with great expectations
As I see your temperature rise

The atmosphere is electric
For we generate so much heat
Lips meet in anticipation
As our bodies finally meet

This night is made for lovers
Sensual pleasures we won't forget
As love consumes each waking moment
Cast in stone, our love is set


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-10-30 03:55 PM


A stirring and most sensual write.
All happiness to you. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-30 04:18 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, this had me thinking of my Joanna because her name is "RosePetal" on Passions and welcoming her with a gorgeous bouquet and her smile when smelling a rose! (kiss on cheek) I wish this gorgeous love to always fill your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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3 posted 2002-10-30 06:31 PM


your loving poems take on a powerful sensuality with this one - it is very well done and I loved it Sue - Paul
vandana
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4 posted 2002-10-30 06:32 PM


enjoyed
NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2002-10-30 07:30 PM


Whoa girl, this is one hot and sensual piece of writing. Phew!!!!

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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6 posted 2002-10-30 08:01 PM


hot hot hot  J...*S*...

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-10-30 08:59 PM


Ummmmm...me thinks you are catching on very
nicely...  

Soft and sensual...very pleasant..

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-10-31 04:21 AM


Interesting...James
VAS
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9 posted 2002-10-31 09:28 AM


Alluring, very alluring, I can't quite get a grip on this line, though...might you help me?

My shiny satin chemise


never mind...on the posting it looked like "sat in" two words and I couldn't make sense of it. Now I see it is "satin" the fabric. Makes perfect sense now. It was...her shiny "what" sat in chemise.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2002-12-27 02:12 AM


this is gorgeous, how did I miss this!?
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