Open Poetry #23 |
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No One Else Comes Close |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! ![]() |
No One Else CoMeS CLoSe.... In so many days... And in so many ways... I've opened my heart to you... As a pathway to my soul. I can still recall... The first time our skin touched -Just our hands- That anxiousness That made my palms wet And tingle with excitement. I can still reminisce.... The first time our lips... Slightly touched... So soft and seductive... My heart was racing. Only fate and time will tell... When YOU will explore and learn Ways of how I love... And how you want me to love. ~ Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!~ [This message has been edited by Kristine (10-30-2002 07:47 AM).] |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome!!!! enjoyed Bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The learning phase is perhaps the most exciting phase of love... and once learnt, the lessons serve well... enjoy your time... and welcome to passion... regards, sudhir |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hi Kristine..welcome to PIP...I'm Toerag..one of the quiet subdued type guys here and I sure like your poetry....good job. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kristine, Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS KRISTINE! Very lovely first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kristine, WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY I hope you like it here. I love your poem, and hope to read much more. Thanks for sharing with us. Love To All, Ethel |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~WELCOME~ Enjoyed your first post. Look forward to seeing more. ![]() Warmly, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very well done, Kristine. Welcome to Passions. Hope your 'One' comes in for a closer look into your warm soul. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Kristine! Welcome aboard! Thank you for sharing this tender poem of love. I look forward to reading more of your poetry! ~ smiles to you this fine fall day (at least it is here in southern Ontario! Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Oh Kristine, this is such a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I wish this true love to always fill your heart with delight and to be like that first day forever and ever with magic, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kristen, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristine, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
There seems to be such a sweet sense of innocent wonder about this writing. I know it comes from your heart. Thank you. etoodog |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry...I found myself wondering...hoping...that I left my love feeling the same things after we met...kissed...and fell in love ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kristine Welcome to Passions, a place of warmth, comfort and inspiration. I very much enjoyed reading your words of love and will look forward to reading more. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
A welcome from a true ghost to a bueatiful spirit The very deep did rot: O Christ! |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
"I've opened my heart to you... As a pathway to my soul." I especially love these lines. a very well concieved description of your angst, mixed with love & lust. ... and they sent him home happy ... one hundred percent. [This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (10-30-2002 04:14 PM).] |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome!!!!!!!!enjoyed this!!!!!! |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
Oh, my heartfelt thanks to all of you !!! ![]() your response means so much to me ![]() ![]() Kristine [This message has been edited by Kristine (11-02-2002 05:44 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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