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Open Poetry #23

If You Say So...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-10-29 06:56 PM

I nominatived my predicate,
got lost in conjugation,
Linguistic denotations
in syntactic exploitation,
Have you seen my amphiboly
embedded in a kernel?
I do not care an anaphor,
associatively infernal.
Parse the salt and pepper please,
condimental equivocations,
Intransitively intransigent,
cemented connotations,
Exhaustlessness redundancy,
redacting passive voice,
Euphamistically, it's adios,
in adverbial rejoice.

[This message has been edited by Tim (10-29-2002 09:48 PM).]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-10-29 10:50 PM

Tim darling man this is exquisite writing, you’ve written something very very special here

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-10-30 08:24 PM

Parse the salt and pepper please,

and nay not adios, mehopes.

Clever, clever write...
and I admit, that I understood only MOST...
sigh...but I swear I used to be able to parse
with the best of them.

Enjoyed Tim.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648