Open Poetry #23 |
Dream To Be |
Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Dream To Be Do you ever wish you were someone else somewhere else? Do you dream that someday soon you will find “the one” to be with forever? What if this dream to be was right in front of you? The success, the happiness, the love is all right there, but just out of reach. All of the sudden the dream fades away. You now cry in the darkness with no dream to be. When you imagine your life the way you want it to be you can no longer see it. You only see what you already are. The people that are around you don’t know about the dream or that they are in it. Inside I am dieing I wish they knew what was killing me was this dream to be. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, you touch upon a depth of emotion in which we are all deeply accustomed to and it can be such a difficult feeling as I am experiencing right now but as long as the love is true so is the faith that endures from distances apart, this is a fabulous debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
An ambitious dream can require both activity and patience before fulfillment...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Enjoyed your first post.. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It does seem sometimes that wanting a dream so badly can hurt. I understand that thought all to well. Welcome to Passions. Enjoy your time here. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to the poetry forums. Many readers will relate to your feelings about 'being' dreams. Sometimes dreams and hopes come true, sometimes not. More often, they change with time and we don't even realize the dream changed until we discover the 'old' dreams and hopes have either been fulfilled or forgotten or replaced. It's always fun to welcome another dreamer in here. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Welcome to Passions....now write two more for a Hat trick....how about The Red Wings and an octopus? |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you everyone for your lovely comments :-) I hope to write a lot more, but I don't know if I can pull of a Hat Trick. I hope you all enjoy my work that is to come. Kelly |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you for the card Sunshine :-)))))))) |
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