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I’ll Share The opposite view
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I’ll Share The opposite view |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I’ll Share The opposite view I’d share with you the truth of me My deeps and my complexity The way my soul aches in cold The fear that I will lose my hold I’d share the real and whole of me The now and then of what can be The way I rise and how I fall I’ll share it now I’ll share it all For you who know all that I am The sundered soul of this woman The fluff that hides the deeper pain The knowledge that I’ll fly again You who know the path to me You’ve seen the sights that I see The loss of spirit the tears I’ve shed The loneliness inside my head I’ll share the darkness and the light I’ll share the pain of empty night Inside my soul I’ll let you see The darkness that will cover me The loss is mine that much is true But even that I’d share with you My soul is playing truth or dare And those I love know this I’ll share Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Mum I love it when you write I listen   love you always and forever Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers at every pore with instant fires Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Krissy (10-29-2002 06:20 PM).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, and im right there with Krissy...always here to listen, always caring. this was a beautiful heartfelt write, and i could feel it with my soul! take care of you. i love you! amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, and we all understand the otherside of you and know we are always here for you as we all have these bad memories and grief we clutch close to our hearts and that is what friends are for, to be able to feel and comfort that special place and share! (sigh) Know you are loved by us all, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marsha, this is a very heartfelt poem. I could see the pain you are feeling and it made me want to reach out to you. I hope that you feel better real soon. thanks for sharing your heart. Love to All, Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Tears and heartache were our common ground That forged a friendship true And through the months, we've many smiles found But I'm depending on you To remember that love's not a fair weather game My shoulders are broad and wide So when the tears flow, do not be ashamed... I'll be right there at your side. This is just lovely, Marsha... I wish your view didn't include so much sadness... my heart hurts for you. Big hugs across the miles. *S* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is really a nice write.....You and Suthern both come on over here...I have two shoulders yanno? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Heartfelt, beautifully written. You write straight from the heart, and it beats loudly on these pages, Marsha, as you share the beauty of your inner soul. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
no matter which side you show of yourself, I always know I will be reading the words of a sensitive friend... hugging you today M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toe... I'm on my way! *G* Marsha... you didn't hear that invitation... LOL For while I'll share my friendship, my love, and even my near-non existent bank account, I WON'T share Toe! LOL |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Everyone thank you so much for reading, this was the flip side of I’ll Not Share and only written because so many thought I should share all of me. Toe darling man of course I know you have two shoulders but I have an eye for the baseball bat Suthern keeps close at hand, and although I’ll share my heart my soul and my thoughts with her always, I don’t want any share of that bat. Suthern beloved heart, what a spoilsport darling heart, I wasn’t going to do more than borrow him for a little while, you could have him back later, even if his shoulder was a little soggier than it was to begin with. But since you know me far too well I’ll stand clear love. Big Smile Love you always darling heart, speak to you soon   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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