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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
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Too thin, it was too thin... she almost made it to but instead broke through she was en-route again. She fancied a conductor an arrival’s welcome whistle if she had a destination she would gladly pay the asking price. But quicksanded feet stunt her success. Her reaching is short sighted. Backward slips her slope as if she never started. Too thin, it is too thin, she thought that she might make it but then... [This message has been edited by jellybeans (10-29-2002 03:04 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Softness makes me think of these "legs" I used to have pictures of....And I do mean they were some of the best looking softest looking legs ya ever seen....boy, I sure wish I had 'em...I'd send ya a copy...you'd agree I'm sure |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
if she had a destination she would gladly pay the asking price. But quicksanded feet stunt her success. Aw, hon... sometimes the price is just too high, even when we have a destination... and good intentions just aren't always sturdy enough to stop the backwards slide... not when it feels that moving our feet condemns us to sink. *S* I really like the images you've used here... just wish it wasn't melting with sadness. *S* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ahem!!! *G* Oh, Toe dear... my baseball bat's not at all soft... and may have to come out of hiding if Lovey's legs do??? LOL |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well toe and suthern...I must [email protected] those 'legs' used to be young and spritely, now they feel very tired, so maybe they will just stay in hiding...they knew what they were doing when they invented jeans.... and thank you suthern...the quicksand I think is in my mind, and I kept sinking when I tried to add the image to the poem, but you seem to have read it perfectly...thank you lady |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
bellyjeans? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Now where's the fairness? *G* If I can read you so well, why the heck can't I write like you? LOL Hunh??? *G* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
JB darling girl this speaks so clearly of a story that needs to wrapped and kept away less it hurt the soul. Wonderful writing darling girl utterly utterly wonderful I love this utterly utterly utterly as always YOUR writing is simply perfect   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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