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GoodBye |
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Owl New Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 6Canada |
Another poem i wrote awhile back. ------------------------------------------------ i know you don't want me to be so sad i know that you're in a place alot more glad i know this is not the end someday we will meet again as friends the fact that we had alot of fun i learned to take things as they come before i had a chance to say good bye i want you to know that i tried i wish we had more of a bond i didn't know what i had until you were gone you're death cought me from surprize then when i looked in your eyes it made me shed my tears because i couldn't really bare but now i know your in a better place i'll put you in my heart i'll put on a happy face your still my friend a friend in my mind i under stand that it was your time "What one does, does for oneself" - Owl |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Owl, thank you for sharing this very delicate, yet universal topic. It shows a grieving process, one which is usually different for each one of us, and, yet so much more. Acceptance being a final good-bye, yet, with ever the sense they are still with us, in spirit. I really appreciate you posting this poem. It touches me greatly. Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-29-2002 11:08 AM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Someone told me once that a person's death is hardest on those he/she leaves behind. Yes, I believe that to be true, as it is difficult to accept the loss. This is a truly insightful and poignant piece of work on a really difficult subject. I applaud you.......very well written. Pen how you truly feel... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Owl, you have written a very touching poem full of wisdom, here. This is one subject that everyone has been touched by at some point. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us. Love To All, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Enos, I know this feeling ever so well and it is so hard to accept the loss and as much as I never want to leave someone behind, I also know that person will always be a friend and that makes me feel better and a little alleviated! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Enos, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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