Open Poetry #23 |
I Will Be Sad |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I Will Be Sad Honey this is crazy the way you're all enticing me. Then you have the nerve to tell me you won't kiss me. You said it has to be your choice and we both agree on that. I hope your choice comes sooner and not later because at this moment I need you bad. Not sure what I'm gonna do if you don't hurry up and let me get closer to you. I know I will be sad. JamesLee Oct28 2002 |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awww, I'm sorry you're sad. Hope things in your life improve soon. Life is too short to be sad... Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooh James....hope things work out for you.. and don't be sad. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dear sweet James, I hope that your feelings will change so that you will be HAPPY instead of sad. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Funny thing about love is that it can go from being sad one minute to being the best experience in the world the next. I wish you to enjoy the latter, but in the meantime, your words touched me. Pen how you truly feel... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) I'm sorry to hear of your sadness, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for all to go well for you soon and for you to be happy forevermore! (sigh) I send angel hugs of relief your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Wonderful, heart and soul expression when love begins to part. Thank you. etoodog |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James darling man this is exquisite writing, truly wonderful expression darling man utterly utterly wonderful I love this utterly utterly utterly as always YOUR writing is simply perfect. If I could hold the starlight And wrap it in a cloak of might I would drape its silvered glow Around your soul just like so If within the thought of touch I could gift you with this much I would whisper yes to the air Send it flying away to where The words stroke across your soul Rising to fill the aching hole The possible within the sigh The wondering of pleasure’s aye If I could gift this dreamers might I would unwrap hope’s delight I hope she says yes soon Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
It's a sad one, but it's absolutely beautiful. I love it! Keep up the good work and I hope things work out for you. All the best, Kelly |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi James, I hope it all works out. Nice write. Sandra |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Enjoy what is not what will be life is fleeting savour the moment it makes what comes that much sweeter The very deep did rot: O Christ! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
J |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
sad but beautifully written Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know those feelings...a kiss in wait is painful... hugss M |
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