Teen Poetry #6 |
WHY?? |
moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
when the sun goes down and the stars fill the sky i lay in bed thinking as questions begin to fly why do i love him he is the one that broke my heart but the really ironic part is i always seem to forget that part Why do I have a guy that adores me Yet I can’t feel the same Why can’t I adore him as he does me And finally let my heart win this game Why does everything have to be so complicated Why can’t things calm down My friends are all that keep me going And who help to relieve this almost permanent frown Why can’t I erase my feelings As though they were never there They leave deep foot prints in my heart That time can only repair Why can’t time speed up And move at the speed of light Yet why can’t I realize That time won’t make everything alright So as I lay here Contemplating the moon I wish and hope that my questions will be answered soon [This message has been edited by moonguardian2004 (12-06-2002 08:17 PM).] |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Aww.. I know how that feels... I often feel the same way, where everything seems to be going right, but your still not happy... I'm like that alot. This was a really great poem though, you write very well! Rich "You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww..the questions "why..." and "what if.." if only we knew all the answers to our problems..then where would we be? in a perfect world do you think? That wouldnt be interesting at all i guess but it would be nice every once in a while. I hope things get better for you hun...try and turn your frown upside down Standing on the edge of the world |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
One of my friends once told me that a guy she knew had to write a final English exam on the topic "WHY?" Apparently, he wrote one word, handed it in, and got an A for it.... and that word was, "BECAUSE". I don't know how true the story is, but I guess, try and live with the questions, rather than spend a lifetime persuing answers which will only come of their own accord.... questioning builds character though hehe.. doesn't everything? Great poem! I like your handle too! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wonderful poem, as usual, coming from you. You expressed those feelings well. I hate it when you just can't like them in the same way! And Im sure they hate it too! Horrible situation! Arrgghh! Laugh often, love much, live well. WinterWren |
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