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Teen Poetry #6

Trying to say...

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

0 posted 2002-12-03 06:15 PM

Loving you is too hard for me,
Cause' I know our love can never be,
Your so definitely obsessed with him,
That you probably don't even see me,

I've tried so hard to tell you before,
Of how much you make my heart soar,
But everytime that I try to tell you,
I lose my nerve like i have before,

But maybe someday you'll notice me,
And I'll finally get to say to you,
I've been your friend for a while,
And I've fallen in love with you.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-03 08:04 PM

Aww! That was a beautiful poem. Truly. I especially like the line "Cause our love can never be." Wow. Keep Writing!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2002-12-03 08:19 PM

Aww man.. I know how this feels, but then again you know all about that, doncha!?

It was a great poem man, I always did tell ya you wrote well, it's about time you started posting! Well ttyl!

Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

3 posted 2002-12-03 08:23 PM

WinterWren-Thanks for the kind words. Its not easy being in love.

Rich-Thank you for the support. I'm sure you know who inspired this one

PeaceInEverything
Junior Member

since 2002-10-06

Posts 31
Ohio, United States

4 posted 2002-12-05 02:26 PM

Nice poem! Really hits home for me cause I have the same problem now. Thanks for writing this I really liked it.

Peace

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