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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
S e e t h i n g with pain, that won't go away. T o r m e n t e d by thoughts of losing you today R e w i n d your thoughts. and lose. control. What You Can't Have- You Can't Resist |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Great write! Love the Style! |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
wow, i thought i had replied to this, guess not....well anywhoo....i realyl like the style you chose to write this in...good job Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Spine Grinder~ I REALLY like this one! This is definately my favorite of yours so far. Not only is this a very well written piece, but you've formatted it wonderfully to. VERY nicely done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
I have to admit, the style you wrote this is beautiful. It shows a certain uniqueness (if thats even a word) that I haven't had the chance to see much of. Great write! -Erica- |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks everyone, i'm glad u all liked it.  What You Can't Have- You Can't Resist |
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