Teen Poetry #6 |
Lightning Strikes |
ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
As fast as lightning Times are changing It's getting frightening No use in exchanging This life must be for me Not what I had conceived In my dreams I can't see Never would I have believed A life filled with wrongs Searching for a happy thought This isn't where I belong Can't fight it, i'm distraught Looking for some way out A chance for something new In my mind I have doubts From what i've been through I can't be motivated Don't want to grow old With you I hesitated Watching my life unfold |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
I was the first to read this poem * honey does her happy dance * anyway great write you really let your emotions flow with this one. keep up the good work! It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, this was reaaaaaaaaly good i liked how it flowed ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
This was pretty good. The rhyming kinda made it flow a little better....one of the few rhyming poems I enjoy.....good job! Riley ~*I found how to laugh, forgot how to smile, somehow your words, make it all worthwhile*~ |
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clve527 Member
since 2002-07-08
Posts 200 |
Starting a poem with a cliche is not a good idea. Casey |
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