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Cow are Evil (Challenge #3)
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Cow are Evil (Challenge #3) |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Who am I? I am the walking contradiction your parents warned you about. I am the sweet-talking artistic princess no one can attain. I am the slob who lives next door -- well, when I come back home I am, anyway. I own a lizard and five fish and my horse is my best friend. I don't trust easily at all but when I do I give my all. I hold within my heart a capacity for love beyond your wildest dreams. I hurt easier than I'd like to admit... but I hide it so no one knows. I dream the old dream of a knight in shining armour sweeping me off of my feet and taking me to his castle. I wish the new wish of a life filled with joy and most importantly loving myself. I play rugby with a passion and ride my horse with wild abandon. I stay up too late and get up too early and I write too little to satisfy me. I compare myself to my sister, but know that I shouldn't, for we are both unique. I'm friends with more guys than girls because I personally think girls are stupid. Who am I? I am Rhonda; the only person truly like me; which is a good thing, cause the world couldn't handle more than one. [This message has been edited by Skyfire (11-19-2002 11:47 PM).] |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow this is absoloutely wonderful, you have really captured yourself in this peice well done. I especially like the lines "the walking contradiction, your parents warned you about". This is a really good peice although in parts it sounds a little bit like a ramble. Thank you for sharing this with us, I really enjoyed the read and remember I am watching carefully and expect greater things from you in the future. The man who had everything  |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was beautiful....its so honest. i really enjoyed it. makes me want to redo mine...eeek regina |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hehehehe---Raiden...I couldn't have said it better myself! Tyhla du dra piyd uv so seht! |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
nicely done rhonda, nicely done. as bumper sticker on a car i once passed on the highway said 'we are the people our parents warned us about'. how true. /jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rhonda~ You already know that I love this. You've described yourself perfectly, and I just love the style in which you've done it. This part, in particular, made me smile... "I dream the old dream of a knight in shining armour sweeping me off of my feet and taking me to his castle. I wish the new wish of a life filled with joy and most importantly loving myself." And you're on the right track for having your 'new wish' come true. Loving this.An excellent write and a perfect response to the challenge. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
You forgot the part where you say you're wonderful.  Kielo According to statistics, a man eats a prune every twenty seconds. I don't know who this fellow is, but I know where to find him. -Morey Amsterdam [This message has been edited by Kielo (11-25-2002 11:12 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Rhonda... cows are our friends |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
Skyfire owns you! The band and the poet. That is all |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*grins* Yeah, what Stinky Twinkie said  Cows are NOT our friends! Not mine, at least No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot. |
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