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TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

0 posted 2002-11-24 04:57 AM

My heart is telling me one thing,
And my mind is telling me another.
You send me so many mixed signals,
So I feel like I shouldn't even bother.

I could talk to you forever,
But I don't know if you want me to.
There is so many emotions running through me,
I don't know what to do.

When we hang out it makes me feel complete,
And it's like you are my boyfriend.
Then at times it feels like we are nothing,
These games really need to end.

You are the only guy I think about,
As I lay down in my bed.
And no matter how many guys I meet,
Only thoughts of you are in my head.

There is only thing I want to know,
So please tell me how you feel.
I can't take not knowing,
Because I know my feeling for you are real.

Lauren

Well I haven't posted in awhile because I've been busy with starting college so let me know what you think.

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-25-2002 03:13 PM).]

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

1 posted 2002-11-24 04:59 PM

I like this poem alot. ALOT. And here's what I think.

I think you are alot like me, in that you get attached way too easily and then live through rose-colored googles. It's been the hardest thing I think I've ever had to learn to do, but I had to step away from what I was feeling and look at what was being said and done between me and this girl. It wasn't what I wanted to see or hear but sadly it all made perfect sense. Then when I realized the "mixed messages" I was getting from her, were only in my head; I simply walked away. I had to. For myself.

That's why I like this poem, it hits home hard because I was just in this sitituation last week. It's hard it really is, but I think it's better for the both of us in the end.

ex animo,
Aaron Woodside

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

2 posted 2002-11-24 05:32 PM

This is such a great poem!! Just like aaron i can relate to this situation with this girl who is now my ex. I wanted more from the relationship but she couldnt see us becoming more then friends and i had to get over it. I still am trying but its definitely hard to get over someone you love and care about so much. Anyway great write and i look forward to reading more from you. Take care.

Chris

clve527
Member

since 2002-07-08

Posts 200

3 posted 2002-11-24 05:53 PM

"My heart is telling me what thing,"

What exactly does this mean?

Casey

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-11-25 01:34 AM

Lauren~
Great job of expressing these emotions.
I enjoyed reading this.
Good to see you posting again.
I hope you'll stick around for awhile.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

5 posted 2002-11-26 03:32 PM

wow I haven't talked to you forever! How are you?? Good I hope. Nice to see you posting again. This flowed nicely and good to see you writing from the heart

stay in touch and take care

xoxo**Kiley

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

6 posted 2002-11-27 04:35 AM

Thanx for the replies I really appreciate them. Just so you all know even though this poem is based on a situation I've been dealing with I want you to know that I have moved on even though it has been hard.
Lauren

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

7 posted 2002-11-28 12:01 PM

I love your poem, im glad u moved on though. i went through the same thing, but hey, we all learn!

RxyFxy04

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