Teen Poetry #6 |
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My Appologies |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
Hey guys its Erica! Sorry about the name change thing, but i forgot my password to my other name (ericaisamonkey) and then i forgot my email password, so yeah. This is some of my latest, hope you like it!!! ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* I'm sorry I want to say that A million times Just to hold you again I remember your lips Always soft and smoothe I'm crying now Because of you Your hurtful words Burned me bad Scars Are all that are left I can't stand the thought Of not having you To hold, and talk to I want you back I fell head over feet And you left me To bleed to death Alone Yet I still want to appologize But I seem to have lost the words That I once cherished so deeply I still love you I will always love you But for that I regret So I send my appologies. |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
Hey good first post it was GREAT! i love the lines- "Just to hold you again I remember your lips Always soft and smoothe I'm crying now Because of you" Wow i can understand that more then you will know! Keep up the good work...i am looking forward to it " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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lildevil Junior Member
since 2002-11-21
Posts 47missouri,usa |
thanks for writing this i know where you are comeing from i still miss my ex and i so wish me and him could get back together |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
snoduck~ Welcome back, Erica. ![]() There is much well-expressed emotion in this piece. you've done a nice job on this and I hope to see lots more from you. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very nice poem you express your emotions very well I like this piece. Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
nice expression Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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