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Teen Poetry #6

Challenge #3

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-11-21 08:49 PM

Hmm..This sounded a lot better in my head..and it's not even really done but it's the best I can do for now.

Here's the girl,
Without a future,
Not much of a past,
But one heck of a present.

She dreams of being something spectacular.
Lack of ambition being her only restraint.
{Her dreams being too big for her head.}

Here's the girl,
Without a goal,
Not much of a plan,
But one heck of a fantasy.

"Into this sea of waking dreams, I follow without pride. Nothing stands between us here and I won't be denied."-Sarah McLachlan

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2002-11-21 09:25 PM

at least you have dreams.....
keep on writing

regina

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-11-21 09:43 PM

I really liked this Erin, but you have an amazing future ahead of you...you can do anything, remember that.

~lisa

And this little masochist, she's ready to confess

-Tori Amos

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-11-25 05:33 PM

StellarChica~
It makes perfect sense that a poem about you
and your life would not be 'done'...since you're not done living yet.

"She dreams of being something spectacular"

And she can be...follow your dreams, no matter how big they are.
Thanks for responding to the challenge.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-25-2002 05:33 PM).]

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