Teen Poetry #6 |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this isnt very good but oh well The world is covered in snow montreal is the place for a show I wish for summer to last all year long ive been around awhile faces changes often but never really leaving vented cryed smiled art school is where i am every day. the sea intersts me with her gentle swells and awesome gails sharks. music is an outlet loneliness is forgotten occaisnally i lurk around reading but not always replying the snow has covered the world and i have a lot to say about it Regina L. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
in my opinion, this says it all: quote: yup, i probably misconstrued(sp) it a bit, but that's how it read to me. very much enjoyed this regina. keep writing “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ina~ I beg to differ...I think this is VERY good. I really love the whole feel of this piece and enjoyed the little peek into your life. I especially enjoyed... "the snow has covered the world and i have a lot to say about it" And we're listening... Nicely penned, Ina, and a great response to the challenge. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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