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A Long Drive Home
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A Long Drive Home |
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k2tomtom21k New Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 9 |
A Long Drive Home (from a good night) 7.24.02 Almost like I’m invincible, Trapped in a stopless clock I refuse to sleep Because I want to be forever How I feel right now I’m left breathless Dumbfounded Spectacular thoughts, Emotions and the sky Was painted with Purple and gold And honest to God Red water colors A reflection off my soul, As to thoughts and you As to all the love in the World. Time is short, Almost invincible My emotions, my life Love, all of my love Is reflected Off and on Into my soul As the suns sets The world sleeps My pen and mind make love The emotions Dance together tonight Under a pale Orange moon From dusk til dawn Under the stars The twilight of my poem, My life, Reflected off my soul. Alas, the land of souls And my emotion My life, my death. All of my soul, live. Hand in hand, A blue aura And a purple suit case With a honest to God Red sun rise, filled With all of my emotions and love. -Jimmy Marble |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
Hey Jimmy good first post. Let me tell you me and everyone else would love to hear more of your stuff. my fav line a- "My life, my death. All of my soul, live." Keep it up " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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