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Teen Poetry #6

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LesterVisaya
Junior Member

since 2002-11-16

Posts 21

0 posted 2002-11-18 10:29 AM

I'll be leaving for todays sunrise
I'll be dragged by yesterdays life
I'll act like no pain bleeds
and live like no one knows
I'll seek through the falsie things I assume
and die in vain's laughter, regreting what I didnt achieve
I wont live to regret the sorrows that burned me
but I'LL stay the same through sorrows that never hurted me
I love cold days that wont shiver my soul
and I love hot days that wont heat my tears
I see NO one road
only different signs of infinity

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2002-11-18 02:05 PM

I really liked this.

I see NO one road,
Only different signs of infinity.

That was really cool.

Thanks for the read,
Keep up the good work.

Darkness

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-11-19 03:27 AM

"I love cold days that wont shiver my soul"
Oooh, I love this line

It's really obscure, but it's great

I am a Knight who says Ni!

LesterVisaya
Junior Member

since 2002-11-16

Posts 21

3 posted 2002-11-19 04:59 AM

Thanks for the comments..Im gald you liked the lines

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-11-21 01:30 AM

LesterVisaya~
I don't believe that I've properly welcomed you to Passions,
so Welcome! Glad you've joined us.
I'm really enjoying your writing so far, and
I hope you'll stick around for a long time and
share lots more with us.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

5 posted 2002-11-21 07:57 AM

Good Job, a very thoughtful piece. I shall be thinking about this one for today.

. Ok, anyways, good job!!!!!!!

Riley

~*I found how to laugh, forgot how to smile, somehow your words, make it all worthwhile*~

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