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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
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"Drifted" (18/11/02) © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1 This old house is falling apart, Mem'ries on the walls ain't there no more. All we percess is in our hearts, But the foundation can't be restored. Seems we've been picking up pieces, Of us for what feels like forever. Moments are worth gold so seese it, But fields of gold won't keep us together. Chorus We've drifted too far For the "WOW" is gone, The sensation of Something new is done. We've drifted away From the saftiness, Of everything we Once refured to as blessed. We've difted apart. Verse 2 Turning the key op'ning the door, Is far from the same as it used to. All I do is stare at the floor, Every night in a bed meant for two. I guess if both ain't in the game, The favorite team as no chance of winning. But thinking back it's such a shame, We had to lose in the beginning. Chorus We've drifted too far For the "WOW" is gone, The sensation of Something new is done. We've drifted away From the saftiness, Of everything we Once refured to as blessed. We've difted apart. Bridge Now I'm sitting on a swing, Going through everything. On a sunday afternoon, Hoping that sometime soon. We'll end up talking again, Cause this can't be the end. All though...I know! Chorus We've drifted too far For the "WOW" is gone, The sensation of Something new is done. We've drifted away From the saftiness Of everything we Once refured to as blessed. We've difted apart. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
except for a few minor typos and spelling errors, i really liked this. the flow was pretty good and i loved the first verse. keep writing.  “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” |
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