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Teen Poetry #6

Good ole' Malloree

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2002-11-16 08:34 PM

Aight I want this to flow
so here I go
15, prep? skater?
Loser? faker? hater?

None of the above
I wanna soar high and love
I don't wanna be like everyone
Who just wanna get some
(not implying anything

I wanna be a leader
not a cheater
I don't want to sit but stand
heck how abou start my own band

My guitar is collecting dust
while my bmx bike rusts
So many me's
How do I come up with the real ME!

I find you then lose you
are you wondering who
You know
thats my flow

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

boy and his spirit
Junior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 41
within my heart

1 posted 2002-11-17 12:00 PM

i like this. it was screaming out to me, identity crisis!
do you know who you really are? I think that through this poem, you are reaching out to us supportive people at piptalk to help you.
i discover myself in many different ways. email me sometime if you would like to hear about it.
i liked the poem. i read it as a song, though. its very strong, and really catchy. nice work!

Trouble Breathing
Member

since 2002-11-12

Posts 63

2 posted 2002-11-17 12:01 PM

I really liked it, alot

I'm new here, so I hope to read more by you..

[This message has been edited by Trouble Breathing (11-17-2002 12:04 AM).]

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