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Teen Poetry #6

Drowning In Desire

StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-11-14 09:28 PM

I'm drowning in my desire for you,
Isn't it ironic,
That you're the one who keeps pulling my head above water?
Just let me drown.
Once I'm down there,
Maybe I can swim to shallow water.
{{Or maybe I'll just die inside you.}}

"Into this sea of waking dreams, I follow without pride. Nothing stands between us here and I won't be denied."-Sarah McLachlan

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2002-11-15 01:41 AM

That was a good poem...desire for someone is important. I would really like to read a longer poem by you...you have a lot of depth

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-11-15 08:28 AM

Woooooo. This one is good. I like the whole drown inside you theme. Thats a good idea for a poem.....gtg bh bye

ri

~*I found how to laugh, forgot how to smile, somehow your words, make it all worthwhile*~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-11-15 02:02 PM

I guess you have to let fate take its course with this one...well that is if you believe in the whole fate thing. I hope you survive it though..and im pretty sure you will. Stay strong

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

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