Teen Poetry #6 |
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Hang On |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Complications and confusions, Like having to hang on, To a rope covered with broken glass, Your bloody palms and shattered trust, But if you let go... You simply perish. What are you going to do? You live life surrounded, Engulfed in stress, Enveloped in deliberate attempts, At failure. When your life’s, Predictably unpredictable and, Unpredictably predictable, At the same time. But you can't let go, (Hang in there baby!) Hold that rope, And push through the pain, Because at the end of the line, There is a beam of light, I like to call, Happiness. [This message has been edited by Darkness (11-15-2002 07:29 AM).] |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
This is good...really good. Hey just a little question for ya...whats your e-mail? you can post in on my next writing...or anyone of them. " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I really liked this piece. It was motivational ![]() "When your life’s, Predictably unpredictable and, Unpredictably predictable, At the same time." Thanks for sharing! Standing on the edge of the world |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Darkness~ OH...I REALLY like this piece. It is very well written and I just enjoyed the whole feel of it and I love the positive ending. Extremely well penned. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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