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Teen Poetry #6

Things I love about You

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

0 posted 2002-11-13 09:05 PM

It seems as though only
Bad things happen to me.
Then you came into my life,
And things turned around.
You bring out the best in me,
Make me feel happy and alive.
You brought out the sunlight
And pushed away the rain clouds.
You are amazing and honest,
In every way.
You are cute and sweet,
And great for me!
You aren’t afraid to admit your feelings
And you aren't ashamed of your true self,
That’s why I just
Can’t help but love you
And all of the wonderful
Things that you do.

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2002-11-14 01:33 PM

WOW!! FROM THE HEART AND EVERYTHING!! I LOVED THIS!! IT IS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS GOING THROUGH! It's like you can't have nice things or everything you attempt doesn't work and then someone speacial comes along and basically saves you from all the bad in your life. I know exactly how you feel.

GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!

Darkness

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

2 posted 2002-11-14 04:38 PM

I agree with dark this was an extremely good write!! It couldnt be more true on how you felt when you met the special one that makes everything so great. I felt that way about my ex but now we are not together anymore even though i wish we were.

Keep writing,
Chris

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-11-19 05:03 PM

PrincessNets~
Such beautifully penned thoughts in this piece.
I very much enjoyed reading this.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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