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Red Roses |
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lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. 
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Though roses may be red And violets may be blue That doesn’t mean that I can still love you You ripped out my heart And threw it on the floor I really don’t think that I can take this anymore The pain that you have caused Will never go away Because that day I cried when you said you wouldn’t stay You came back to me Asking for forgiveness And although I want to I don’t think that I can give this I looked into your eyes And stared up at your face And wished that we could return to that happy place But I know that’s not possible I know our loves not true But I still spend everyday wanting to be with you |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
aww, this is incredibly sad, and incredibly powerful.  *hugs*I am a Knight who says Ni! |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
yep been there. your words are too true. -majnu |
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palmerj Junior Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 30Coxsackie, NY |
It seems like many have been there, including myself its a horrible pain, but like they say time does heal all wounds. Good Luck! |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Very powerful and emotional write. I know i'm also one of those that can relate to this unfortunately. Keep writing you obviously have some talent. Chris |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow.. very powerful. I love this, and i am amazed at your bility to say no..i wish i was that strong, maybe i will be someday. i loved this poem, very amazing write. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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