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emotional ride
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emotional ride |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
through the circles and curves around the loops and inside the dark tunnels my emotions take a wild ride through the forbidden alleys and caves around the winding streets and inside the dark crumbling hallways my emotions take a wild ride through the ins and outs of love around the sharp corners of hate inside the twisting and turning heart of another my emotions take a wild ride |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautifully done i can't wait to open the other poems and reply to them pls, remember next time that we can only post 3 a day  thanks for sharing hope to see more in the future là où est mon amour? |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This is pretty good... indeed, emotions are often difficult to control, and it can often seem like they are in the driver's seat... Just don't run any red lights, and you'll be fine. Parasite Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
roxywrestlegirl04~ I enjoyed this 'wild ride'. Very nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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