Teen Poetry #6 |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
You could be the end, just as you were the beginning. You could tear my heart, just as you formed it. You could take my life away, when it was you who showed it to me. You could form a hate, though you taught me to love. You could bring me pain, though at first you took mine away. I just can't believe I would give in, You gave me the strength to stand true. Not to sure where this came from, but I do...ya know? Laura Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
full of interesting concepts... I'm not sure where it came from either? But I'm not? Very nice work, Laura. Parasite |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
I liked this one i dont no where it came from either but good write "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oooh, I like this one! Reminds me a lot of some of my earlier poems Right on! I'm so cute! |
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