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Symptomed Believe |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
slender visage croones in weep symptomed blush stains white cheek flush of aura, paled child's tear stab of jealous, misplaced in prayer fear in modest crush with awe tonic quaffed with smoothness flaw facaded glory of impersonal pride wonderment carried, joyousness abide swift martyr in prejudice dwell left remains of ashened frail careless gesture in fallen grace existence revoked, forever eraced “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” Getting away, isn't Running away. "The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me." [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (11-05-2002 05:49 AM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
LOVE the title, Tiff. Your style is starting to grow very nicely, which is evident when I look at this poem... I see a lot of your personal touch shining through here. Loved the emotional images... strong work, Tiff. Parasite |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
i really enjoyed the rhyming in this poem thought that it was kewl  "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
TIFF! ^_^ Loved this! *points at poem* ^_^ Though I had to look up some of the words. ^^; Expanding vocab can be fun! XD *adds to library* Leah |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
 <--that's all I can say... er.. you did spell "erased" wrong though  I'm so cute! |
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