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Swaying On Both Phones (Revolution 9 Reprise)
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Swaying On Both Phones (Revolution 9 Reprise) |
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Winston Froom Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 32 |
Swaying On Both Phones (Revolution 9 Reprise) ---------------------------------------------------- .......Number nine, number nine, number nine........ Chopin Nocturne, two cellos and a violin will do. Reality television, soon to be reality submission. Un, deux, trois ||Un, dos, tres||One, two, three ....Number nine, number nine, static, ~ber nine..... Inspiration to paper to music to waste product. Sickles, pickles, and Maxwell's Silver Hammer. .......Number nine, lumber nine, number nine........ Beg your pardon, sir, Nocturne is not for strings! Pizzicatos Run-time environments Unicode characters Orchestral Hits Yes, it's "Che" Guevara on my ideological shirt. Marx Who? If anyone spots my motivation, I'm still resting. Goo goo g'joob! Goo goo g'joob! Goo goo g'joob! number nine number number nine number nine nine Do you don't you will you won't you ???? The White Dakota got a red sidewalk in 1980. Fiddleabo ut, fi ddlea bo ut, f i ddl e about . Here lies Winston Froom, against his own will. this epitaph for your benefit, kind reader. April 1, 2069 Isle of Wight. No. 9 No. 9 No. 9 e n do f f i l ei n d i c a t o r |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
this was uniquely intersting. jumbled, but in its own way making sense. liked it alot winston. quote:*loved that line* write more, post more. “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh this is so damn cool!! I LOVE it.  This had a very creative and unusual feel to it which makes it even greater. I have to commend you a hell of a lot on this style and how you pulled it off. Well done. I am most definitely impressed.  ~AF~ Consider yourself added to the hitlist. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Reading it made me sleepy. Regardless... goo goo g'job. Parasite |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Great work! Yes, write more, post more. I'm eager to read more from you. Keep it comin'! Laura Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i really do enjoy your poetry. and this one seemed to remind me of the movie 'sorry, wrong number'. perhaps because of the disrupted transmission, and how it does eerily relate to the woman's murder. oops, sorry for spoiling the ending.  nicely done. however, in spanish, one is uno, not un. just thought i'd let you know. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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Winston Froom Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 32 |
Thanks to everyone for replying to this. This actually came from a "song" in the Beatles' White Album called Revolution 9 and a "song" on Radiohead's Ok, Computer album called Fitter Happier. That was the inspiration anyway... -Cheers- W.F. |
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MidnightSkyeBlue Junior Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 14 |
I know Revolution 9 by heart..Love it, and The Beatles as well Such inspiration you had there! Enjoyed..and I don't know much radiohead sorry..so does John Lennon inspire you?? *shrugs* just curious..getting a feel of your work..[This message has been edited by MidnightSkyeBlue (11-29-2002 11:59 PM).] |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
that was damn good. It was interesting and wierd in a good way. I have no idea what you're talking about here, but thats okay. -Stinky Twinkie- |
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