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Challenge 2
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Challenge 2 |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Here ya go, challenge #2, nobody go looking me up now :/ divine child im looking at you hehe Keep on going Every second Veer for no one In your presence Nothing anyone can say will take away your drive Break the molding Earn a lifetime Deep within you Needs are calling Answer quickly and step closer, to you Reaching Zen |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
*gasp* Now all the stalkers will know who you are... Although the large picture of you to the left thats been up there for a year probably didn't help with keeping your identity a secret. Great one kev, gotta love those Z's  ~Lis |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
cheater, you added your last name...  Doesn't bother me, though. I guess you needed more space to complete your poem, and I can see how the last line of your first name didn't complete the poem on its own... Love the trochaic flow of it all... but ehh, you wrecked it on that one line in your last name... you know, the long one. I'm not gonna back my browser up just to see... I'm lazy and I have to get to class soon. Nicely written nonetheless. Enjoyed. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I am NOT a stalker!  LOL. But that is besides the point. I loved this poem. You did a great job. *Allison* |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Yes, great job! I also loved it. Laura Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job. |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
I enjoyed this one but i have to say that my fave one would have the be the cartwheel one lol yea but this one was kewl too almost as kewl as this hat>  LOL "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*thumbs up* Go Kevin!!! I'm so cute! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kevin~ True to your form, this is excellent! You have really been growing in your poetry, and I'm very much enjoying reading you. Keep up the great work. Thanks for participating in the challenge. I hope to see you on the next one too. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a great answer to the challenge! I especailly like your opening.. it's great advice. It all flowed pretty well, although a few lines were a little long. It didn't take away from the poem, though! good work Most of us go to our grave with our music still inside of us. |
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