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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
I know I might've, Led you to some false conclusions, I've often led myself there too. Word spreads like fire, And now I have to explain myself, To everyone. Tell them how: I was just a little lonely, And you made me feel, A little less lonely, It was just what I needed. I'm sorry. It didn't mean a thing. At least that's what I've convinced myself. Well, that came out badly. At least I think so..we'll see what you guys think. "They say you need to pray if you wanna go to heaven. They never tell you what to say when your whole life has gone to hell."-Brand New [This message has been edited by StellarChica (11-04-2002 10:09 PM).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
what i got was that sometimes you say stuff and it comes out totally wrong, that happens to everyone. i liked your poem though |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Yeah good poem, we all get lonely and lonliness is the lonliest feeling in the world you know? anyway great piece. I'll be looking at more of your stuff in the future. Read ya later, Darkness  |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ohh..I've had people *grumbles*parents*grumble* who jump to completely inaccurate cnclusions about me all the time...apart from being excruciatingly frustrating, I HATE explaining myself to people I dont think deserve a bloody explanation. I think your situation might have been a bit different though. Just tell the person you didnt mean it to come out like that- and to stop acting as though youre a disease...hope it goes well. As for the poem, i think it served your purpose  Are you scared? |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Cherish needs an advil. Enjoyed your poem, Erin... it is true that it's hard for us to find the, what do you call em? Words? Yeah words. The words to say what we really mean. And sometimes it comes out embarassingly wrong. That's OK. This poem isn't embarassingly wrong. Nice work. Parasite |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I think what you were expressing came out just fine. We've all been there in some way or another...did something out of loneliness and ended up regretting it jus cuz it was like a quick fix. It's how humans cope..but was it really only for that one time and didnt mean n e thing? Or did it? That you have to answer for yourself and thats a whole other story... Sometimes I get so weird |
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