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Teen Poetry #6

loneliness kills

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

0 posted 2002-11-04 05:10 PM

i have no friends
no idea where it begins or ends
stories are told
forever are sold
i deserted them,
they deserted me,
all i want is to be happy
its no fun anymore
everyone here is a bore
life the way it was,
was so much better,
if only i'd have read the letter

(i dont know if any1 understands this, i guess it was kind of confusing. it started out to be completely different then what it ended up like.)

!respect the alphabet!

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

1 posted 2002-11-04 05:19 PM

awesome sam purely awesome!!!!you know when somme ppl act like they r "going out" with someone just to look popular.....

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2002-11-04 05:25 PM

alright Dinky(i dont know your name so dinky i will use) i liked your poem, it was short and it had feeling behind.
I dont understand the end, but hey....

Regina

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2002-11-04 05:56 PM

This is a really good poem Sam...A good vent. But I wasnt to happy bout one of the posts that I am guessing was attackin me. Not namin any names.
*Allison*

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