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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-11-03 10:56 PM

(CAth.. here ya go! "darling")
Wanting
Needing
Wishing.
This addiction is unhealthy.
Thinking
Yearning
Craving.
I need to see you again.

Why are my feelings so strong this time?
I have this feeling,
I'm out of line.
Is it that you feel the same?
Why is it that I'm acting lame?
You didn't even remember my name...

(sorry if this dissapointed u, i was in a hurry, and wrote the first that came to mind--u know who!!)

"i told you i'd never say goodbye . now i'm slipping on the tears you made me cry but that's what i get"

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

1 posted 2002-11-03 11:09 PM

It didnt stink

it was good

u love him hes the sunshine of your life

o0o0o baby LOL

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2002-11-04 10:45 AM

Sounds like an inside thing- but I enjoyed it nonetheless.

This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-11-04 03:41 PM

It disappointed me, Sara.

  But then again, I'm out of your little "loop," aren't I?

Didn't like this poem.  You obviously make good use of the time you invest in everything else you write, because if this is an example of your impulse writing, you obviously rock on revisions.

Don't hate me!  I respect you enough to be honest.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2002-11-04 04:24 PM

I have nothing to say...U r an excellent writer......but anyway...I am sittin here waitin 4 u to get online cause i need some ideas as to what i should get justin 4 his b-day...:-* he is soooo cute!LOL.
*Allison*

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

5 posted 2002-11-04 04:33 PM

That little :-* thingie is supposed to be lady pimp......just thought i`d tell you. Justin said he wanted somethin cool.....What would that be? A pic of me? no no no thats all wrong...How bout a sweater..No i`d just end up wearin it..or what about..........
*Allison

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

6 posted 2002-11-04 05:15 PM

hey,
i loved this poem
i really like poems that rhyme and guess what?!?
this one did!!!
i cant go back to french class maybe you could write her a poem in french for me to somehow get me out of class

but anywayz i aint gonna ramble even tho i might have already did......Wait!!
i am stoppin right there
great write!!!
~sam~

!respect the alphabet!

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

7 posted 2002-11-04 08:53 PM

Thanks to everyone and Parasite...
for having the respect to tell me the truth.
(I WAS rishing, i will admit.. so it did suck.

)
This all means a lot.

Thanks again.

~Sara

"i told you i'd never say goodbye . now i'm slipping on the tears you made me cry but that's what i get"

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