PoetryIsLife (Challenge #2)

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PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-11-04 01:00 AM

People do wonder about me.
Others don't notice, though.
Everyone has their ability to be,
Their own existence to pursue.
Relatively few realize this.
Yesterday, I fell in love again.
In my heart, each day anew
She gives me hope, peace.
Love is beyond mere beauty.
In this city of angels I live,
Feeling her so near,
Every day all the more far.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (11-04-2002 01:02 AM).]

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-11-04 03:58 PM

Wow, Titus... you really did answer this challenge quite well. I really liked the poem, you comprimised between personal description and event in a very expert manner.

You've succeeded here, Titus. And you've impressed me as well.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-11-04 05:04 PM

Ti, you already know what I think of this one, but I'll say it again. Wow. I'm still speechless, and everytime I read it, I love it even more *hugs*

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2002-11-04 05:27 PM

wow, this was awesome.....
it seemed sad to me....
i really enjoyed this alot,
keep on sharing

Regina

Morgana Le Fay
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since 2002-10-25

Posts 22

4 posted 2002-11-04 08:26 PM

"Yesterday, I fell in love again."

I love this line. It's wonderful. I can't quite explain why, so don't ask.

by the woods, you hear it creeping, and you know, they're the blood in you

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-11-05 01:11 AM

I've really gotta figure out what this challenge is and then i'll be a lil more "clued in". But N e wayz i loved it ti

Great job as always sweety!!!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

6 posted 2002-11-05 01:52 AM

Michele - in the Teen Poetry forum, just above the topics list is a mail icon that says Teen Poetry Challenge #2. Click on that to see the challenge.

PrincessNets
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since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

7 posted 2002-11-05 11:19 AM

I must say that I really enjoyed reading this poem. I am in awe...such talent...great poem!

-Jeanette-

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2002-11-05 02:56 PM

Titus~
You already know how much I love this one,
but I'll tell you again.
I see so much of 'you' in this piece.
It's like a sneak peek at your heart.
Very well done, my friend.
Challenge met and exceeded.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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