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foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2002-11-03 10:54 PM

See that star?
Shining bright?
I wished upon that star one night.
I wished for you.
To be with me.
And here you are.
For all to see.

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

1 posted 2002-11-03 10:57 PM

man i hope this one didnt stink as much as i thought it might hope yall like it

i like these faces LOL

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-03-2002 11:00 PM).]

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-11-03 10:58 PM

When you wish.. apon a star.. makes no differece who you aarrree!
..sorry man- i watched Rocket Man today. lol

good poem man.. you're good with all that rhyming stuff-i'm not.

i'm tired.. I want to sleep, and dream, and smell my jacket.
lol

ttys,

Sara

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-11-04 03:25 PM

Very nice! I love the use of iambs... this took me like three seconds to read, and I didn't miss anything in it.

Very, very cute poem... I love what you've done here.

Parasite

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

4 posted 2002-11-04 07:09 PM

I would just like to say that I enjoyed your poem very much. I think that the rhyme scheme fits very well with this poem. I love it and I can't wait to read more of your poetry.

-Jeanette-

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

5 posted 2002-11-04 07:17 PM

I would just like to say that I enjoyed your poem very much. I think that the rhyme scheme fits very well with this poem. I love it and I can't wait to read more of your poetry.

-Jeanette-

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

6 posted 2002-11-04 07:22 PM

I loved your poem! I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to read more of your poetry!

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

7 posted 2002-11-04 07:23 PM

I loved your poem! I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to read more of your poetry!

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-11-04 09:44 PM

Good poem dude..

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

9 posted 2002-11-04 09:47 PM

Cute Cath, very nice

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

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