Teen Poetry #6 |
everlasting |
devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
why do you have to be so complicated cant we be friends i dont want this to be the end memories willl stay locked up feelings hurt hearts broken why dont you give this frindship a chance dont give up this friendship like a gobstopper everlasting |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
gobstoppers are good...... like this.. like.. (lol- NEVERMIND) take care, great job. "i told you i'd never say goodbye . now i'm slipping on the tears you made me cry but that's what i get" |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
this was really good i like the gobstopper thing that was cool fantastic write ~sam~ !respect the alphabet! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Tahnk you! Thank you! (bows with a smile) LOL. *Allison* |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I love the gobstopper thing... haha... it really sent the tone for a spin, and caught me off guard. Great work. Parasite |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
I liker gobstobberz MAN!!! "I am who I am who I am who am I?" [This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-04-2002 09:23 PM).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i cant stand gobstoppers, but i liked the way your poem ended, it was light but sad and the same time. nice work |
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