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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
monday,tuesday,everyday everday, i hide away the guilt gets me i almost cant breath i see you, you're coming closer what do i do? you walk right by me panic i do no more, you have just closed the door !respect the alphabet! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Hey. I like it. I just ate some octupus. It is nasty!!! It tastes like raw fish. blahhh. Anyway...I love this poem. Its a masterpiece. *Allison* |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
maybe u want the no in "do no move" to be 'not'? maybe, maybe NOT. lol good write, good write. You use the alphabet quite well in this poem, my friend.. may the force be with you. right... Allison!!!! Octupus!? ewww! No wonder you dont have a boyfriend, who would wanna kiss dat mouth!?! Tenticals! ahhhh ahhh ahh! (ok ok ok, sorry, that was a joke, ur gonna get a bf tomorrow.. or the day after... k? k!) I blow dried my hair and it's soo poofy, it wont stay behind my ears!!!! ahhh!!! that's worse than octupus! Good write sam.. keep good writing on! |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
liked it man |
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lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. |
awesome write, very touching. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
This was a great poem. You are truly a (dramatic pause) Master of the Alphabet!  lol Later! "You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!" |
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